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Lazaroth wrote:
Ghost Line wrote:
Lazaroth> I'm certainly too late to say that, but Lazaroth, I've just listened your gnsow_b interpretation, it's ... I can't find the words

it's like a good wine

Oh, but it's never too late...

Also, I'm not that big a fan of wine unless it's in a winesauce... But if you say it's like a good winesauce I'm all with you...

z_killemall wrote:
If you like them I can make some more, and if there's something you don't like something about them please let me know

They are both nice but I do have a few critiques...

There is a somewhat artificial 'feel' to them. I would say it's due to mainly two things.
1. Too little or wrong use of the reverb. Reverb does a lot to the overall sound, but using a bad reverb could make it sound just awful. Also, you have to make sure detail isn't lost so it comes out all fuzzy.
2. The soundlibrary used. An expensive one is better and sounds more real plus they have expressions for the instruments, e.g. play stronger etc. However, if you look a little into number 1 I think that this (number 2) in much can be forgiven.
Ok, now on to a few smaller compositional things.
1. The violin in FM_SUNNY is a bit sharp/loud compared to the other instruments. From 24 s and forward basically.
2. The are distiorsions in the sound in FM_SUNNY.
3. You may want to tweak the last note in 13.
Also, don't forget that you can put in some info into the metadata of the ogg. E.g. your name etc. You can look on the existing songs for inspiration. You are also allowed to use 48kHz and higher bitrate if you want.
I'm updating the webpage in the first post behind the scenes, but once I'm finished I'll add your songs as well.
z_killemall wrote:
Thanks for the critiques, the libraries I'm using are actually pretty good (Miroslav Philarmonik), but I didn't dedicate much time to these remakes, I just made a quick configuration for the levels, reverb and notes velocity, which is probably what makes the whole thing sound artificial.
I'll put some more work into them and reupload them.
Lazaroth wrote:
z_killemall wrote:
I'll put some more work into them and reupload them.
Looking forward to it.
Waxonator wrote:
May I recommend LA Scoring Strings and Hollywood Strings as they are the most realistic string libraries ever made.
z_killemall wrote:
Waxonator wrote:
May I recommend LA Scoring Strings and Hollywood Strings as they are the most realistic string libraries ever made.
Yeah I know there are better libraries around, but I currently don't have enough free space to install those monsters... I probably will get a new hard drive in a couple of months, I'll give them a try then.
However, I polished a bit the two songs I uploaded yesterday, they're not perfect yet (I still have to work some more on the levels) but I guess they sound a bit more realistic.
13:
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?wo2yky0y2nyFM_SUNNY:
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?k2ytml2gk5zLazaroth wrote:
Waxonator wrote:
May I recommend LA Scoring Strings and Hollywood Strings as they are the most realistic string libraries ever made.
If you do a generous donation...

But I agree, they do sound good!
z_killemall wrote:
However, I polished a bit the two songs I uploaded yesterday, they're not perfect yet (I still have to work some more on the levels) but I guess they sound a bit more realistic.
I think 13 is getting there but SUNNY may need further work. Still a bit flat sound.
Much better ending in 13 now but I think it can become even better.
May I also do a suggestion, though I don't know if it will sound good or not. The fast strings you faintly hear in the background from the beginning in SUNNY, try to lift them up a bit. Then at around 24s they can really be enhanced with the addition of the flute which complements it.
Also, you don't have another flute to try with? It sounds a bit dull. And, if possible do a little spicing of the strings as well. Might be better if you play a little more with dynamics.
coldgreysand wrote:
Alright! I now submit a zipped up collection of completed tracks, named as their MIDI counterparts, completely oggulated and vorbisified.
I'm still fiddling with a few others, mostly dungeons, so they're not presently included.
Here it is, hope it works...

ragholio wrote:
Wow, it looks like a lot of work has been going on in my absence. Hopefully I'll post some of my second phase mixes soon but i'm pretty busy at the moment with my new business and also writing a new symphony 'The Crusader' based on my Norman ancestor Walter De Lindsay who led an army to Palestine alongside Edward I The Longshanks during the 9th crusade.
Nice work

Lazaroth wrote:
@coldgreysand
Sounds good! I'll listen through it more this weekend and give you feedback if you want me to..

I've also added the songs to the website (and yes I will update the design eventually...

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@ragholio
Sounds like a lot to do, but also fun..

We'll see when you have time for more DF-music.
Lazaroth wrote:
Ok, so I couldn't keep away from listening to the songs longer than this..

I thought I'd give some feedback and my thoughts of the songs.
The overall sound and feeling is great! Generally I have no complaints, only things that I might have done differently, but that's just a matter of taste.
The sound is what I've come to expect from you by listening to the "previews"; good use of instruments/dynamics etc, good mixing levels but perhaps sometimes too little time to "catch my breath", i.e. in your face much of the time.
You have taken all songs to a new level, but IMO especially 29 and SUNNYDAY.
29 is my favourite, although I find the first part of the song better, since it's more unexpected than the second half. That sitar is pure genius and I like it a lot, a hell of a lot. It also reminds me of my favourite Beatles song (Tomorrow never knows)...

In some of the songs you've done a twist that I'm not 100% agreeing on, but then again, it's all just a matter of taste.
E.g. 21 starts off more evil than I had imagined, but I think it works though.
Or 18 in which I always thought it was wind, but you interpreted it as water. I think the song is played at night on land, but I'm not entirely sure.
Or that some songs have what I consider Spanish influences, e.g. 22, FOLK1, FOLK2, TAVERN, SQUARE_2. I like the versions, but the arrangements are more Spanish than I expected, or how I should put it..

All in all, very good quality and it's a good thing your providing the songs for free, cause I would have payed for listening to them...
